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Image of Me by ~singsoftlylove:iconsingsoftlylove:

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This is an image of myself
That I rarely let be seen
The girl that just tears apart
The girl that no one needs
Who looks in the mirror
And just wishes to scream
Tries to feel nothing
But knows she bleeds
Internally
Where it means the most
Continues to hurt
Flows out to the dirt
Pools on the ground
Silently surrounds
Up to her throat
And she thinks she might drown
Knows it’s to deep
But can’t seem to get out
Whishes to speak
But can’t make a sound
©2008-2010 ~singsoftlylove
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Author's Comments

I hate valentines day, it reminds me of all the bad things I've ever thought of myself. I figured if I wrote them down, maybe they'd go away, maybe they'd erase my frown.

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Mood: Compassion ~Isika Feb 14, 2008, 3:05:11 PM
Oh, I need you! :glomp: Sad but wonderful poem!

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"Did you dream?"
No

"Tell me a dream?"
I rarely dream

"You're broke."

Quote from an awesome comic by Fehed Said & Shari Chankhamma called 'The Clarence Principle'! Vist their website link
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~singsoftlylove Feb 14, 2008, 3:14:20 PM
I'm in love with this poem. I don't know why, but I am.

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You dont really know me,
I dont think you ever even tried
We're on the same routine
Where you say you never have the time
What do you want me to be?
Do you want me in your life?
I feel so incomplete
You left me to fall behind
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~Isika Feb 14, 2008, 4:16:16 PM
It's a very good poem!

--
"Did you dream?"
No

"Tell me a dream?"
I rarely dream

"You're broke."

Quote from an awesome comic by Fehed Said & Shari Chankhamma called 'The Clarence Principle'! Vist their website link
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~Living-in-Fantasy Feb 14, 2008, 5:12:26 PM
That was lovely.
Good work sexy legs.

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It Reminds me What to do Before I'm Dead...
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~singsoftlylove Feb 14, 2008, 5:42:56 PM
Why thank you!

--
You dont really know me,
I dont think you ever even tried
We're on the same routine
Where you say you never have the time
What do you want me to be?
Do you want me in your life?
I feel so incomplete
You left me to fall behind
:iconliving-in-fantasy:
~Living-in-Fantasy Feb 15, 2008, 11:48:51 PM
Anytimeee :)

--
It Reminds me What to do Before I'm Dead...
:icon4every-fallen-tear:
~4every-fallen-tear Mar 13, 2008, 9:22:25 AM
i <3 it.... i <3you too lol i miss you!!!!!!!!!!!

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My heart is stirred by a moble theme as i recite my verse to the king; my tongue is the pen of a skillful writen
:iconsingsoftlylove:
~singsoftlylove Mar 13, 2008, 11:36:53 AM
I miss you. You ned to get mesanger back.

--
You dont really know me,
I dont think you ever even tried
We're on the same routine
Where you say you never have the time
What do you want me to be?
Do you want me in your life?
I feel so incomplete
You left me to fall behind
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